Prompt Read this student’s description: It was raining hard as Maria walked down the street. She felt cold and wet and was worried about being late. This description tells readers about the setting and character, but doesn’t help readers picture the scene. Strong writing shows readers what is happening through vivid description. Write a 3–5 sentence version of this rainy scene, but include descriptive language to help readers feel like they’re actually there. Try adding sensory details (what the character sees, hears, tastes, smells, or feels) and more specific verbs (like “strode” instead of “walked”) to show readers the scene. Bonus challenge: Now, challenge yourself to include even more detail in your description. Try to revise at least two words or phrases to make the scene more vivid for readers.

Answer:

raining hard = raining cats and dogs

walked= strolled

felt cold and wet = could feel the rain droplets as sharp glass pieces hitting her chilled face and numb hands even in the biting cold

worried about being late=what killed her inside was being late at that peculiar time.

Explanation:

It was raining hard as Maria walked down the street. She felt cold and wet and was worried about being late.

It was raining cats and dogs as Maria strolled down the street. She could feel the rain droplets as sharp glass pieces hitting her chilled face and numb hands even in the biting cold but what killed her inside was being late at that peculiar time.

The changed sentence has the same meaning as the original sentence but depicts more feelings of the girl both on the outside and the inside.

As its was mentioned , its raining very heavily and maria is strolling down the street and she was worried that she will be late and may be she will fall ill .

The Maria could feel the the droplet of the rain on her face through the sharp glasses and also start feeling the cold due to which her hands became numb and she was worried from the inside may be she will be late .

The Passage elaborated the feeling of Maria a she is very worried to being late even though she is feeling so cold .

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