(100 points) Can someone give me constructive criticism on how i did for a 5 paragraph essay and mark 3 things i could improve on



We have been using gps systems for years now, but do you know the risks that come with having one in almost all of your devices? Well if you don’t, just know that it's not 100% risk, they can help you too. Are all of the rewards worth it? It is time to find out.

Its common knowledge that GPS can find and use your location for many things such as finding your destination, speed, ect. Ect. But do you know how they do it? GPS systems use multiple satellites to track your location to make many things easy for you like we mentioned previously. “A GPS tracking system uses the Global Navigation Satellite System (GNSS) network. This network incorporates a range of satellites that use microwave signals that are transmitted to GPS devices to give information on location” Knowing all of this can help you figure out where your phone is if you lost it.

If you are ever in danger and call the police, they can use your GPS to find your location if you are ever unable to locate where you are. This can save many lives. GPS is also important to “figure out where you are needing to go” when it comes to vehicular travel. Many cars nowadays even have screens in them so you can connect your phones GPS to it, further highlighting the importance of the GPS.

However with the GPS, its not all sunshine and rainbows. Yes it can help you get out of an emergency, but it can be the thing that causes it in the first place. GPS is something that could be taken easily from someone who knows what they are doing, making you vulnerable to cyber attacks. If someone knows this information, they can figure out so much about you. So GPS can be dangerous to have.

In conclusion, GPS systems can be very helpful to the point where you feel like you need them, and even if you do not, there are many amounts of benefits to using them, from knowing where you are to being able to find lost items across the planet. yet there are still some risks when using them. Everything uses gps now and it is astonishing how little people truly know about them when they should. At least accounting for the huge amount it is used in anyone's day to day life. Don't you think this should be common knowledge?

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Explanation:

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We have been using gps systems for years now, but do you know the risks that come with having one in almost all of your devices? Well if you don’t, just know that it's not 100% risk, they can help you too. Are all of the rewards worth it? It is time to find out.

Its common knowledge that GPS can find and use your location for many things such as finding your destination, speed, ect. Ect. But do you know how they do it? GPS systems use multiple satellites to track your location to make many things easy for you like we mentioned previously. “A GPS tracking system uses the Global Navigation Satellite System (GNSS) network. This network incorporates a range of satellites that use microwave signals that are transmitted to GPS devices to give information on location” Knowing all of this can help you figure out where your phone is if you lost it.

If you are ever in danger and call the police, they can use your GPS to find your location if you are ever unable to locate where you are. This can save many lives (i would say, this could save your life sense you where just talking in the 2nd person). GPS is also important to “figure out where you are needing to go” when it comes to vehicular travel. Many cars nowadays even have screens in them so you can connect your phones (an apostrophe is needed in phones) GPS to it, further highlighting the importance of the GPS.

However with the GPS, its not all sunshine and rainbows. Yes it can help you get out of an emergency, but it can be the thing that causes it in the first place. GPS is something that could be taken easily from someone who knows what they are doing, making you vulnerable to cyber attacks. If someone knows this information, they can figure out so much about you. So GPS can be dangerous to have.  

In conclusion, GPS systems can be very helpful to the point where you feel like you need them, and even if you do not, there are many amounts of benefits to using them, from knowing where you are to being able to find lost items across the planet. yet there are still some risks when using them. Everything uses gps now and it is astonishing how little people truly know about them when they should. At least accounting for the huge amount it is used in anyone's day to day life. Don't you think this should be common knowledge?

In your own words, explain the similarities and differences between a phrase and a clause.

Which sentence should end with a question mark?
O 1. Diane went to the door
O 2. How did Shane do that
3. We doubt if it's true
4. We'll wait until later

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In a story containing the following points, which would likely occur LAST?
A) Franklin was excited about his upcoming hicking trip.
B) The night before the trip, Franklin could barely sleep.
C) On the day of Franklin's hike, the sunny weather was perfect.
D) Franklin went to the outdoor sportsstore to buy new hiking boots.

write a compare and contrast essay for Virtual vs real classrooms

What might you do differently when doing a read aloud to children​

Is the following sentence correct ?

Review your answers and compare them with the model answers.​

Which is a motif in a work of literature?

the continued use of figurative language
concrete events or symbols that reoccur
the repetition of vowel sounds in a monologue.
the repetition of a word in a character’s speech.

First one near WILL get brainless hurry with CORRECT answer.

• How was political violence used to attack African American political power?

Marked out of 2
People throughout history all have had the same American dream.
Select one:
o True
o False

what does waverly's description of the triumphant smile that she throws back at her opponent for good measure suggest about her attitude

Why might a poet try to avoid making too many leaps in a poem?
A. Readers may become annoyed if they feel the
poem does not
make sense.
B. Readers may conclude that the poem is too conservative or
predictable.
C. Readers may prefer poems that ask them to make their own
connections.
D. Readers may not enjoy the way the
pem uses rhythm and sound.

list four Types of stressors ​

PLEASE HELP!!
Which sentence is a complex sentence?
A. He will keep the prize with his other prizes in his home.
B. He showed it to his family and to the reporters in the meeting
room.
C. We saw that he was happy; his smile lit up the room.
D. The prizes, which were made in California, were made out of gold.

The ocean lashed out at our ship like an angry child.

What two figurative devices does the sentence use?
Select one:

Simile and idiom.

Personification and simile.

Metaphor and hyperbole.

Understatement and irony.

NAME____________________________________ 4-____ DATE________________________________________

I-MATCH EACH LETTER WITH ITS BEST ANSWER. ( 10 PTS )

_________1-Gives interesting facts or extra information about a topic. A-Bolt Print

_________2-Makes lists easier to read and understand. B-Fact Bar / Side Bar

_________3-Show where places, events are located. C-Bullet Points

_________4-Explains information or how something works in a visual way. D-Map

_________5-Shows what words are important and can be found in glossary. E-Diagram

II-SELECT THE BEST ANSWER ( 20 pts )

________1-Shows that a word is important.

a)Italics b)Diagram c)Transitional words

________2-Its purpose is to entertain, inform, persuade, or educate.

a)Biography b)autobiography c)Transitional words

________3-Imaginary events, made up characters, from author’s imagination.

a)Non-fiction b)Transitional words c)Fiction

________4-Writing organized by chronological order.

a)Sequence b)Italics c)Bolt print

________5-True stories that can be prove and the purpose is to inform.

a)Non-fiction b)Italics c)Fiction

________6-First, then, before, after, later…

a)Transitional words b)Side words c)quick words

________7-Is something you can prove to be either true or false.

a)Opinion b)diagram c)Fact

________8- what one thinks about something or somebody, is not necessarily based on facts.

a)Opinion b)diagram c)Biography

________9-Is a true story about someone's life.

a)Opinion b)diagram c)Biography

_______10-It has information about words. The words are listed in alphabetical order.

a)Dictionary b)diagram c)Transitional words

III-EXPLAIN THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A “BIOGRAPHY AND AUTOBIOGRAPHY” ( 5PTS )​

A _____ is where most of the material is taught. It is not a scored activity.

Write a line imitating the meter of the example (anapestic tetrameter).

10. When writing an essay, using an anecdote, a startling fact, or a striking detail is a good way to
O A. contradict your research.
O B. introduce your conclusion.
O C. round out the thesis statement.
O D. begin the introduction.

In Act V, scene i of Romeo and Juliet, what role does the Apothecary play in the catastrophe?

Which quote from When Birds Get Flu by John DiConsiglio provides the best idea for an additional source to research for more information on diseases?
A. Dr. Kumnuan Ungchusak raced his jeep through the countryside of Thailand. He's a health official in Thailand.
B. Since then, the CDC has been active throughout the world, following infections such as smallpox, polio, tuberculosis, AIDS, and SARS.
C. The next step for Dr. Dowell and his colleagues was to determine how mother and daughter had caught the flu—and if they’d passed it on to others.
D. The pandemic affected everyone—and spread everywhere. Outbreaks swept through North America, Europe, Asia, Africa, Brazil, and the South Pacific.

BRAINLIEST
Read this excerpt from The Secret Garden.

Her hair was like curly silk and she had a delicate little nose which seemed to be disdaining things, and she had large laughing eyes. All her clothes were thin and floating, and Mary said they were “full of lace.” They looked fuller of lace than ever this morning, but her eyes were not laughing at all. They were large and scared and lifted imploringly to the fair boy officer’s face.

“Is it so very bad? Oh, is it?” Mary heard her say.

“Awfully,” the young man answered in a trembling voice. “Awfully, Mrs. Lennox. You ought to have gone to the hills two weeks ago.”

The Memsahib wrung her hands.

“Oh, I know I ought!” she cried. “I only stayed to go to that silly dinner party. What a fool I was!”

Which detail best supports the idea that Mrs. Lennox is concerned?

All her clothes are thin and floating.

She said she went to a dinner party.

Her eyes were not laughing that morning.

She asks the officer questions.

Which part of the sentence is a compound subject?
The skin and hair are damaged.
ОА.
are damaged
OB.
the skin
O c. skin and hair
OD
hair are damaged

Your parents let you in
house gora by Idrite ale
sriend telling thim/her ab
did.

3 reasons to support why the United States should increase the minimum wage

Which of the following did the police do to try to stop the marchers? (Select all that apply)
The police arrested the protestors.
The police marched with the protestors.
The police set dogs on the protestors.
The police sprayed them with water hoses.

will give brainliest
What is the best way for someone to identify a suitable career?


A Brainstorm a list of things that person likes to do and things they are good at and find the “common denominator”

B Rely on the advice of someone you trust, such as a parent or friend

C Pick one that is popular, prestigious and pays well

D Take an aptitude test and use the results to make a decision

Whose bedroom is this. Whoch detail from the passage indicates that the narrator realizes her father has a kindly motive for his collecting

Tom Sawyer is best described as...
A
commanding, because he sets the rules for the boys' gang.
B
shy, because he quietly obeys the leadership of the group.
С
disenting, because he disagrees with the gang's ideas.
D
foolish, because he is tricked by the boys in the group.